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Cold Butterfly
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I Made A Song...

Post by Cold Butterfly » Sat Sep 14, 2019 11:42 pm

So the other day me and my friend went into this studio nearby, and I decided to make a rap song just for fun. The sound quality is really lo-fi, but if you guys could check it out maybe, then that'd be great :music-listening:

https://soundcloud.com/user-684704358/scattered
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Re: I Made A Song...

Post by Nick » Sun Sep 15, 2019 6:30 pm

Too lo-fi for my taste, but you have a solid flow. Needs a better mix though.

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Re: I Made A Song...

Post by Cold Butterfly » Sun Sep 15, 2019 6:49 pm

Nick wrote:
Sun Sep 15, 2019 6:30 pm
Too lo-fi for my taste, but you have a solid flow. Needs a better mix though.
Thanks for the input :happy-partydance: I'll take your word on that.
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Re: I Made A Song...

Post by mileswide » Tue Sep 17, 2019 3:43 am

I'd say the recording quality and sparse backing suit the dark tone of the lyrics. Your flow's decent and while your transitions from each section (if that's the right phrase) aren't fully smooth, you should take that with a pinch of salt as I don't have a musical bone in my body! And I enjoyed it, which was the main takeaway, any plans to make any more?
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Re: I Made A Song...

Post by Cold Butterfly » Tue Sep 17, 2019 4:37 pm

mileswide wrote:
Tue Sep 17, 2019 3:43 am
I'd say the recording quality and sparse backing suit the dark tone of the lyrics. Your flow's decent and while your transitions from each section (if that's the right phrase) aren't fully smooth, you should take that with a pinch of salt as I don't have a musical bone in my body! And I enjoyed it, which was the main takeaway, any plans to make any more?
Thank you :mrgreen: I'm aiming to try to drop an EP by Christmas, and i'm glad to hear your comments about the track.
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Re: I Made A Song...

Post by mileswide » Tue Sep 17, 2019 11:52 pm

Cold Butterfly wrote:
Tue Sep 17, 2019 4:37 pm
Thank you :mrgreen: I'm aiming to try to drop an EP by Christmas, and i'm glad to hear your comments about the track.
Nice, keep us in the loop about it, always good to hear a forum member make music and have talent :D
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